1、医药科技工作者撰写医药论文时一般要求附英文摘要，英文摘要写得准确与 否，很大程度上体现了作者的学术水平，也与论文的影响力有很大关系。我们有幸 从《医药导报》杂志社获取了相当数量论文的英文摘要原稿。该刊特邀英文校译— —同华中科技大学同济医学院冯新为教授，年逾九旬仍伏案笔耕，为这些稿件做了 大量细致深入的校译工作，可谓句句汗水字字珠玑。给医药科技论文英文摘要的写 作提供了一个范本，对广大医药科技工作者来说也是一次极其珍贵的学习机会。本 刊特辑录刊载其原文及冯教授所作修正、点评，以飨读者。 2、编制体例：本文按照原文、修正、点评次序编写；修改、插入处以黑体斜体 ，删节处附括号说明，如有点评附上标数字注明。 1、原文： DeterminationofGallicAcidinZhixuetingLiquidsbyTLCScanning ZHOUQun1,XULa-ying2(1.DepartmentofPharmacology,TongjiMedicalC ollege,HuazhongUniversityofScienceandTechnology,Wuhan430030,Ch ina;2.TheFacultyofPharmacy,HubeiCollegeofTraditionalChineseMe dicine,Wuhan430061,China) ABSTRACTObjective:TodeterminethecontentofgallicacidinZhixueti ngliquids.Methods:Zhixuetingliquidsweredissolvedbydistilledwat er,andthenextractedintothesamplewithbutanaletc.Thesampleswe redeterminatedbyTLCscanning(λS=280nm,λR=350nm).Result:Theaver agerecoveryratewas96.36%andRSD=2.39%.Thecontentsofgallicacid in3fivebatchesofsampleswere0.38,0.42and0.47mg/ml.Conclusion: Themethodissimple,convenientandavailable. KEYWORDSTLCScanning;Zhixuetingliquids;Determination;Gallicacid 修正： DeterminationofGallicAcidinChuxueting1oralLiquidsbyTLCScannin g ZHOUQun1,XULa-ying2(1.SchoolofPharmacy2,TongjiMedicalCollege, HuazhongUniversityofScienceandTechnology,Wuhan430030,China;2. TheFacultyofPharmacy,HubeiCollegeofTraditionalChineseMedicine, Wuhan430061,China) AbstractObjective:TodeterminethecontentofgallicacidinChuxueti ngoralLiquids.Methods:TheChuxuetingoralLiquidwasdissolvedind istilledwater,andthenextracted（intothesample删去）withwater-s aturaledn-butanol3etc.forthepreparationofsamples.Thesampleswe resubjectedtogallicaciddeterminationbyTLCscanning(λS=280nm,λ R=350nm).Results:Theaveragerateofrecoverywas96.36%,（and删去） RSD=2.39%.Thecontentsofgallicacidin3（five删去）batchesofsam pleswere0.38,0.42and0.47mg/mlrespectively.Conclusion:Themethod issimple,convenientandfeasible. KEYWORDSTLCScanning;ChuxuetingoralLiquids;Determination;Gallic acid 点评： 1、zhixueting应为“止血停”而非“出血停”，自相矛盾。“出血停”也可译为 hemorrhage-stopping，以方便国外读者理解。 2、school可作“（大学里的）院”解，原意是“药学院”，而非“药理教研室” ，故改之。 3、斜体n表示“正”。2、原文：
ContentDeterminationofEmodininQingreMingmuCapsules
LUOMing-zhu1,ZHANGHong2(1.HubeiProviceInstituteofDrugControl,
Wuhan430030,China;2.The75310MedicalTeamoftheArmy)
ABSTRACTObjectives:TodeterminationcontentofEmodininQingreMingm
uCapsules.Methods:Tlcswasused,silicagelTlcplate,developingso
lventwasBenzene-Ethylfermate-formicacid-Methanol-water(3:1:0.05:0.1
:0.5)ofwhichtheuppersolutionλS=435nm,λR=530nm.Result:Thelinea
rrelationshipofsampleapplicationwhichrangedbetween0.168-3.09μg
wasgood.Theregressionequationwasbelow:Y=105417.7X-1115.6,r=0.9
995;areragerecoverywas100.53%,RSD=3.38%.Conclusion:Thismethodi
ssimple,accurateandconvenient.
KEYWORDSTLcs;QingremingmuCcapsules;Emodin
修正：
DeterminationofEmodinContentinQingremingmu1Capsules
LUOMing-zhu1,ZHANGHong2(1.HubeiProvicialInstituteofDrugControl
,Wuhan430030,China;2.The75310MedicalTeamoftheArmy)
ABSTRACTObjective:Tosetupamethodforthedetermination（content删
去）ofEmodincontentinQingreMingmuCapsules.Methods:IntheTLCa
ssay,a0.5%canboxymethylcellulosesodium(wasused删去)silicagelG
plateandadevelopingsolventwithamixtureofbenzene—ethylformat
e—formicacid—methanol—water(3:1:0.05:0.1:0.5)astheuppersolution
wereused.λS=435nm,λR=530nm.Results:Agoodlinearrelationshipwas
foundwhenthesampleamount(which删去)rangedbetween0.168-3.09μg
（wasgood删去）.Theregressionequationwasasfollows:Y=105417.7X-1
115.6,r=0.9995.Theaveragerateofrecoverywas100.53%,RSD=3.38%.Co
nclusion:Themethodissimple,convenientandaccurate.
KEYWORDSTLC;QingreMingmuCcapsules;Emodin
点评：
1、中成药名用斜体书写，也可译作removingpathogenicheattoimproveacui
tyofvision。
3、原文：
ResearchonTheAcuteToxicityofHuningCapsule
XINZhi-wei,ZANGZhi-he,MAIXiao-xia,FENGJun,YANGWan-qing,LIAOH
ong-li(TeachingandResearchSectionofPharmacy,TheThirdMedicalUn
iversity,ChengduCollegeofPLA610081,China)
ABSTRACTObjective:ToobserveandtesttheacutetoxicityofHuningCa
psuleonKunmingmiceafterani.g.Methods:Countthedeathcasesofm
icein7daysafterthei.g.andworkouttheLD50ofHuningCapsule.R
esults:TheLD50ofHuningCapsuleonmiceis3981mg/kg.
KEYWORDSHuningCapsule;AcuteToxicity;LD50
修正：
AnExperimentalStudyoftheAcuteToxicityofHuningCapsules1
XINZhi-wei,ZANGZhi-he,MAIXiao-xia,FENGJun,YANGWan-qing,LIAOH
ong-li(TeachingandResearchSectionofPharmacy,ChengduMilitaryMed
icalCollege,TheThirdMilitaryMedicalUniversity,Chengdu610081,Ch
ina)
ABSTRACTObjective:ToobserveanddeterminetheacutetoxicityofHuni
ngcapsules(onKunmingmice删去)afterasingleintragastricadministr
ationinthemouse.Methods:50Kunmingmicewererandomlydividedinto
5equalgroups,with10animalsineachgroup.Asingledoseof7500,
5630,4200,3150and2360mg/kg-1ofthecontentofthecapsulesweread
ministenedthroughagastrictubetoeachofthemiceofthe5groups,
respectively.Thenumbersofthedeathsofthemicewithin7dayswere
noteddownandthemediarletherdose(LD50)ofHuningCapsuleswascal
culated.(Countthedeathcasesofmicein7daysafterthei.g.andwo
rkouttheLD50ofHuningCapsule.删去)Results:TheLD50ofHuningCa
psuleinmicewas3981mg/kg.Conclusion:HuningCapsuleshaveonlyami
noracutetoxicity.Itisthereforesafetousethedrugclinically.Fu
rtherstudyofitstoxicityinlong-termapplicationisrequired.
KEYWORDSHuningCapsules;Toxicity,acute;LD50
点评：
1、“呼宁胶囊”也可译作antitussiveandantiasthmaticcapsules.
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